Wednesday, February 12, 2014


My entry for this week's Trifextra Challenge!  

"The Cast"

He'd betrayed all who live in the light. 
My soul coagulated, as I stood in his gaze for what I knew would be the last time.
"Goodbye, Heylel," I breathed as he descended.

8 comments:

  1. I agree with Björn - coagulated soul is fantastic.

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  2. Any time you can work 'coagulate' into a piece, you're ahead of the game. :-) Thanks for linking up. I enjoyed this one.

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    1. I really appreciate it! Thank you!

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  3. Hi,

    I've been talking to Thomas Marlowe and we are both missing the Trifecta Challenge. One thing led to another and we have decided to set up Light and Shade Challenge where there are prompts twice every week and a chance to share what inspiration strikes.

    We are not trying to be the same as Trifecta. They were awesome and I miss them. We do have some really exciting ideas of our own, though and can't wait to see what happens. It would be great if you could come and join us and see where this journey takes us. Good writers are always welcome. If you have any questions then get in touch either on the Light and Shade Challenge Blog http://lightandshadechallenge.blogspot.co.uk/ or on the Facebook page. It would be wonderful to hear from you. Lyssa M x

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