Sunday, June 29, 2014

The Waters of the Oasis

          I wrote this for a flash fiction challenge, but I wasn't able to post the whole story due to the word count.  I read it after already submitting it and just felt like it fell short.  So, here's the whole short story.  Maybe it is more fulfilling.

Photo By Ashwin Rao


“The Waters of the Oasis”

Every movement hurt more than the previous, shifting his broken bones, igniting his pain.  Galloping was too much, but he couldn’t stop; he was almost there, and he wouldn’t slow down now.  The wind felt icy against his clammy, sweat-sheened face and neck as the horse sped on at the speed of deadly venom. 

The Oasis was bigger than the stories made it seem; he’d thought it to be easier—run in, jar the precious liquid, and get back.  He wasn’t expecting a battle, or to have to search a dense forest for such an unspecific thing. 

The waterfall roaring in his ears made it difficult for him to think clearly, the night made it even more difficult for him to see, and the pain didn’t make anything easier.  He was beginning to lose hope.  He would die before he found it, he was certain.

He searched through the trunks of the dozens of surrounding trees, trying to spot it, hoping it would stand out, but everything looked the same through his blurry, fading vision.  Under the tree, I will be.  If you dare, stir the waters, and I’ll be there, he remembered the riddle.  But there were hundreds of trees.  They all looked the same… how was he supposed to know which tree? 

He was dizzy now.  The thin air made it harder to breathe.  He lay over onto the horse’s rough, matted mane, not able to support himself any longer.  He knew he wouldn’t make it, but he’d try until his last breath; he wouldn’t die having given up.

He tried to keep his eyes open, but his consciousness was slipping quickly.  Straight ahead, there was a darker tree, a sick-looking tree, close enough that he could see its grey bark, and limp branches.  Its boughs were startlingly bare, and its trunk appeared weaker than even he was, and brittle… more brittle than the autumn leaves it lacked.  Jet, the horse with the appropriate name, galloped straight for the ancient-looking tree, stopping in front of it deliberately, stamping his hoof at its base. 

“Jet,” he sputtered out, gasping for another breath, “we have to keep going.  Please.  It’ll to be too late.”

The horse’s protest was loud and demanding, as he stamped his hoof harder this time at the base of the old, dying tree. 

“Jet, please,” he coughed out, losing the strength to hold on any longer. 

Jet danced, stamping and huffing, knocking him from his back.  He hit the unforgiving ground with a groan, and tried to lift his cheek from a thick, sticky puddle.  The water was warm, like candle wax, and he felt it begin to bubble under his skin.  He tried to move out of it, but Jet nudged him back into it with a scoff and stamped the ground again. 

He raised a shaking hand to his cheek and smoothed the water from his dirty skin.  Could it be? he thought, a small tinge of hope returning to his heart.  Could this sick, lifeless tree harbor the healing water?

He mustered his strength and pulled the small jar from his satchel.  He dipped it into the murky, shallow water, filling it and returned the lid as tightly as he could.  He slid the filled jar into the bag around Jet’s thick neck and slapped him, sending him off.  The ground pounded under him as he watched Jet gallop away—the fastest horse in the land.  Jet would make it back to her in time.  The healing water would cure sickness.  Deadly wounds, no, but it would cure her sickness.  He could see the happiness returning to her eyes, and it made him smile as he lay staring into the pitiful limbs of the sacred tree.  He’d die soon, he knew, but he only wanted to save her.

--C.R. Jennings

Wednesday, June 25, 2014

In the Angel's Touch / Unfinished Business

I wrote this for this week's Light and Shade Challenge.

Photo Courtesy of the Light and Shade Challenge

"In the Angel's Touch / Unfinished Business"


     The oak was the largest she'd ever seen, she always thought.  It was beautiful and wise-looking; its branches were spindly, and its trunk twisted upward into the boughs in such an intriguing way.
     The bench beneath its shade was such a comforting spot--one she visited often.  She sat quietly, alone, staring across the well-tended, fenced-in yard.  The birds' song and the wisp of peaceful wind were the only sounds surrounding her.
     "It's peaceful, isn't it?" he said, interrupting her daydreaming.  She didn't bother looking over at him; she kept her gaze on the wind-bent flowers, her thoughts on the calming rustle of the leaves above her.  
     "Do you know why they call this the Angel Yard, Lucy?" he questioned softly.  
     A quiet sigh was the only acknowledgment she'd offer--a subtle raise of her chest and shoulders.  
     "Well," he continued cheerfully, "some say that they can feel a presence here, the embrace of their loved ones passed."  
     Lucy's heart slowed, feeling heavier.  
     "Some say, they've talked to them, even seen them."
     She sighed, heavier this time, wishing that were true.  "You know I don't believe in things like that," she said dryly.  She could feel him staring at her, but wouldn't look over; she didn't have to; she knew his reaction to her disbelief all too well.  "Only the weak believe that way," she added, "those who can't deal with life and its reality."
     His voice was sad sounding, a hopelessness plaguing it.  "Yet you've seen it so many times with your own beautiful eyes."  He reached out carefully and rested his hand softly atop hers.  She flinched inwardly, not allowing him to notice.  
     She said simply, "I see what my heart wants me to see, nothing more."  Nowadays, her voice was a dead, monotonous sort of drone, not at all oozing with the buzzing sweetness it used to.
     "Faith is for everyone, Lucy," he reminded her.  "Even the stubborn."  He squeezed her hand tighter, as if he could convince her with just a touch.  "Some seek proof but never find it, but you... proof came straight to you; you didn't have to look.  Your proof is right here."  He pulled her hand into his lap, his fingers stroking hers, desperate to make his point.  
     "You're just a figment of my own desperate desires."
     "You don't believe that."
     "I do," Lucy argued.  "The mind is a very powerful thing."
     It was quiet again, only for a moment before he spoke softly into her ear.  "I love you, Lucy."
     He smiled sadly at her internal struggle with her faith; he'd seen that confusion in her eyes so many times before.  He'd always known he'd found Lucy for a reason.  He was always her strength and he knew how hard it'd been for her since he'd gone. 
      She sucked in a composing breath, tears welled in her eyes, chest tight, and she finally looked at him.  She squeezed his fingers in hers, and a smile full of freedom and relief replaced her pain... and his too as he faded away.


--C.R.JENNINGS

Thursday, June 19, 2014

The Spark

I wrote this for The Light and Shade Challenge :)

"The Spark"


          A spark.  If only she saw it.
          I watched her every move, spinning, twirling across the floor.  Her spirit as free as her hair, every strand rippling about as she moved easily to the haunting indie song that poured from the speakers.  Her pain was expressed in her precise moves, and her struggle reflected in her eyes, but I could always feel the stoic courage radiating from her soul.
          I'd never even spoken to her, yet I felt I knew her.  Her eyes had only ever met mine once, and I'm not even sure if she noticed it, but I will never forget it.  It's such a consuming feeling; a distracting feeling; one that I knew all too well.  It took my breath, dried my throat, and froze every muscle in my body.
          The spark grew every time I watched her telling her story on the floor.  A spark.  That's what I wanted her to feel.  But I was only a seat in her audience; how could I ever show her my soul, like she had showed me hers?
          My heart was splintered from the many times I'd walked across love's raw planks, bare-footed, trusting.  I had become afraid of that spark, afraid of what it could do to me, afraid of how it could be ripped away from me, leaving me torn beyond my control.
          The music met its abrupt end, and she fell to her knees, out of breath, an intense look in her eyes.  I stared back into her gaze, realizing that her stare... her eyes were on me, and my chest was heaving as much as hers.  
          How would it destroy me this time?
          I looked over at her smiling face, remembering every day that had come with every wrinkle, every memory.  She bent down to twirl Marie, laughing.  She danced more carefully now, but her hair was just as long and just as free, only without the rich browns it used to be; the strands were as silvered as the Mockingbird.
          She tugged Marie to her hip, kissing her cheek.  I just stared, until those same hazel eyes found mine.  They glimmered, just as they always had, glowing and sparkling in light and love.  There it was... the spark.


--C.R. JENNINGS
  374 words

Friday, June 6, 2014

Out of Ink

I wrote this for the Light and Shade Challenge.  It's the first time I've been able to sit down and do this new challenge, and I'm excited to be a part of a new writing community :) So, thanks!

          "Out of Ink"

          My pen has been sentenced to death.
          I thought admitting it would give my muse the kick in the rear it needed, but no. It's hardwired stubbornness is infallible. It'll let me continue climbing carelessly until the weight of my impatience has snapped every branch of inspiration.
          An unmoving pen to the audacious page--ink blots exposing the many times I've pressed its felt tip to the still-blank paper, but the words remain dormant, teasing me, testing me...daring me.
          Yet another page covered in a deafening silence.





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