Sunday, June 29, 2014

The Waters of the Oasis

          I wrote this for a flash fiction challenge, but I wasn't able to post the whole story due to the word count.  I read it after already submitting it and just felt like it fell short.  So, here's the whole short story.  Maybe it is more fulfilling.

Photo By Ashwin Rao


“The Waters of the Oasis”

Every movement hurt more than the previous, shifting his broken bones, igniting his pain.  Galloping was too much, but he couldn’t stop; he was almost there, and he wouldn’t slow down now.  The wind felt icy against his clammy, sweat-sheened face and neck as the horse sped on at the speed of deadly venom. 

The Oasis was bigger than the stories made it seem; he’d thought it to be easier—run in, jar the precious liquid, and get back.  He wasn’t expecting a battle, or to have to search a dense forest for such an unspecific thing. 

The waterfall roaring in his ears made it difficult for him to think clearly, the night made it even more difficult for him to see, and the pain didn’t make anything easier.  He was beginning to lose hope.  He would die before he found it, he was certain.

He searched through the trunks of the dozens of surrounding trees, trying to spot it, hoping it would stand out, but everything looked the same through his blurry, fading vision.  Under the tree, I will be.  If you dare, stir the waters, and I’ll be there, he remembered the riddle.  But there were hundreds of trees.  They all looked the same… how was he supposed to know which tree? 

He was dizzy now.  The thin air made it harder to breathe.  He lay over onto the horse’s rough, matted mane, not able to support himself any longer.  He knew he wouldn’t make it, but he’d try until his last breath; he wouldn’t die having given up.

He tried to keep his eyes open, but his consciousness was slipping quickly.  Straight ahead, there was a darker tree, a sick-looking tree, close enough that he could see its grey bark, and limp branches.  Its boughs were startlingly bare, and its trunk appeared weaker than even he was, and brittle… more brittle than the autumn leaves it lacked.  Jet, the horse with the appropriate name, galloped straight for the ancient-looking tree, stopping in front of it deliberately, stamping his hoof at its base. 

“Jet,” he sputtered out, gasping for another breath, “we have to keep going.  Please.  It’ll to be too late.”

The horse’s protest was loud and demanding, as he stamped his hoof harder this time at the base of the old, dying tree. 

“Jet, please,” he coughed out, losing the strength to hold on any longer. 

Jet danced, stamping and huffing, knocking him from his back.  He hit the unforgiving ground with a groan, and tried to lift his cheek from a thick, sticky puddle.  The water was warm, like candle wax, and he felt it begin to bubble under his skin.  He tried to move out of it, but Jet nudged him back into it with a scoff and stamped the ground again. 

He raised a shaking hand to his cheek and smoothed the water from his dirty skin.  Could it be? he thought, a small tinge of hope returning to his heart.  Could this sick, lifeless tree harbor the healing water?

He mustered his strength and pulled the small jar from his satchel.  He dipped it into the murky, shallow water, filling it and returned the lid as tightly as he could.  He slid the filled jar into the bag around Jet’s thick neck and slapped him, sending him off.  The ground pounded under him as he watched Jet gallop away—the fastest horse in the land.  Jet would make it back to her in time.  The healing water would cure sickness.  Deadly wounds, no, but it would cure her sickness.  He could see the happiness returning to her eyes, and it made him smile as he lay staring into the pitiful limbs of the sacred tree.  He’d die soon, he knew, but he only wanted to save her.

--C.R. Jennings

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