Hello again!! Here's my latest Trifecta Writing Challenge I hope you enjoy it :)
"Peephole"
I stared so hard my eyes were
burning from the dryness. My nostrils
flared, and I felt the rough lump of shock scrape down my throat and shoot
through my stomach.
My trembling hand gripped the knob,
but I couldn’t move.
Manicured fingers pressed into the
skin of his neck, moving into his hair.
The adulterous embrace was fish eyed through the lens, his lust warped
through the small, circular opening.
His betrayal swallowed me whole,
depositing me into a dark, destructive place, where my vice came face-to-face
with his lies and deceit—things I should’ve seen before but was blind sighted
by the happy-hazel shade of his honey-flecked irises and the melodic hum of his
voice.
Manipulate… that’s all he’d done
for a year was manipulate me.
My fingers tightened around the
knob, my chest tight with anxiety, begging me to fling the door open and
confront his knavery.
Suddenly, sapience washed over me,
stealing my vindictive thoughts and replacing them with a solid reminder of the
reality outside of my emotions.
My now-steady fingers lifted,
turned the deadbolt, and flipped the light switch toward the floor.
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Excellent use of tone here. Very tense.
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